HW for Thursday, 9/18

1. Read Rules for Writers, Chapter 3: “Make Global Revisions…." Bring in your Essay 1 current draft (hopefully you've edited the commas). 

• Some revision self-reflection: how well do you clarify the thematic meaning of your own personal examples? Do you attach the myth's theme to your personal examples? Highlight the sentences in your essay that you intend to provide the thematic point (hopefully these are the thesis and topic sentences). 

• We also want to discuss Conclusions: 
• Does yours include too much surprise meaning? What might you do to fix that? We will discuss such ideas on Thursday.