Global Revision

Based on our prompt requirements, one big technique that begs to be used is "compare and contrast" between two subjects. Whether you compare, contrast, or both--your ideas should include more connection to your myth. So, here are some basic questions to help you globally revise your ideas and, perhaps, reorganize the essay paragraphs and add more depth through related descriptions of you to your myth character.

• Who are you comparing and/or contrasting yourself with in the myth? 
• What qualities do you share or have in opposition? 
• What are your actions that compare and/or contrast to 

For the next 30 minutes, start with those questions as you go through your essay feedback and write down "new" or clearer ideas about why the myth is important to your life. Afterwards, we want to have a brief class discussion about how/what you want to do to revise based on these questions.