Thursday, November 13, 2014

Editing: SV AGR



One of the bigger grammatical issues to edit out draft to draft is subject-verb agreement (S/V AGR), which means that the subject and its verb have to match in number (singular or plural) and person (first, second, third).

Identify, then Fix
  1. Underline the subject

    • If the subject is a noun phrase, reduce the subject down to its proper pronoun so that you can better match it with the verb.

      • The amazingly bright Johnny = He
      • Johnny and Tom=They
      • The sisters and I=We
      • My favorite lamp=It

  2. Circle the verb(s) that the subject 'acts on'

  3. Ignore every other word in sentence to test for agreement! 
    • Use chart on 198 for a visual aid/reminder (all regular, or typical, verbs will follow the top chart)
    • Pay attention to sentences with multiple subjects 

      • 'and'= plural
      • 'nor' or "'or'=verb must agree with the subject closest it (200)
      • Collective nouns (where a group of people is referred to as one unit) such as jury, committee, crowd, and class are to be singular forms unless the idea in the sentence shows the individuals acting separately (see 201-202)
      • indefinite pronouns are treated as singular (200)
      • Who, which and that=agree with the antecedent 
        • antecedent sounds like 'ancestor,' and it means: the noun or pronoun that came before which the current one is supposed to refer to...
      • A title of a work or company needs a singular verb, even if it sounds plural!  (The Chicago Bears is my favorite team.)
      • Treat gerund phrases (when -ing verbs are used at start) as singular nouns (Beginning with today...)
      • ...and other special cases

Editing  Strategies for Your Essays
  • Read your paragraphs backwards or with a sheet that covers the other sentences to slow you down
  • Do your editing on a printed copy first, so that you can better diagram
    • Diagram each sentence for its subject (underline) and verb (circle). 
      • Convert the subject to its pronoun form (
        • Or, cross out (on the page or in your head) all the words but the basic subject 
      • Read for agreement between pronoun and verb to test the verb's correctness
    • Make sure to then write the corrections above where you find a lack of agreement. Consult your Rules for Writers for extra help where unsure. 
  • If editing on the computer:
    • Re-type your essay from a blank document
    • REALLY DO THIS WITH at least one Major Error editing session, for the action is another way to slow down and reflect on what you wrote:
      • Run-ons (both fused and comma splice) editing session
      • Fragment editing session
      • Comma editing session
      • Verb Tense shift editing session

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